Teacher Feedback on my Rough Cuts

After looking at both of these feedback sheets I have gathered good areas in which I need to improve my wesbite, digipak and music video. Firstly; 

• For the website I have already made a twitter page for my website I just haven't added the link to my website yet so that is the first thing I need to do. Secondly, after we have created the music video I need to add that to my front page because at the minute I was using the original video for a template which obviously wouldn't look good on my final product as it would be promoting the wrong one. Finally, rotate the images on the photos page, adding captions to them so that the fans can understand what is going on and also add better pictures to some of the pages. 
• Secondly, the digipak needs significant improvement to it, we have thought of making the front cover background just a solid image so that the cassette on the front stands out. Make sure that the lighting on the images reflects the genre and lets the images stand out, considering a good location setting throughout the images. Make the track listing bigger so that people can read it and make sure that it contrasts from the background. 
• Finally, the music video we need to make sure that the pace fits the atmosphere of the song because at the minute our video's editing pace is too slow for the song. We need to make sure that our actors are animated because they don't seem to be enjoying the video and as it has a happy tone they don't replicate this. Maybe add a costume change into the video because we have the same costume within the outside location and the barn location. 

The adaptations to our rough cuts will begin this week and we will focus on other feedback from people such as our target audience making sure that we ask the correct amount of people to have a good evalutation on our results.